I do say that this is a sign of dad getting into his groove on comic drawing- the pictures work well together and are well composed in a natural un-forced way, they are expressive and fun to look at.. I want to see this with continue with deeper content– like make up stories in comic form!!!!!
Cardboard Rhino 
Special thanks to Barry for suggesting the third row of frames.
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Good drawings, good cartoony car in panels 2 and 4, good tire continuations in panels 5-7, good bird smile.
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The tire in panel 3 is brilliantly drawn. Super good job on the tread.
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I do say that this is a sign of dad getting into his groove on comic drawing- the pictures work well together and are well composed in a natural un-forced way, they are expressive and fun to look at.. I want to see this with continue with deeper content– like make up stories in comic form!!!!!
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Yeah, what he said. Dad usually rejects the panel. Here he embraces it.
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