Dude, that's a good page. I like the drawings, they're moody. I like the penciled words behind the ink words, and I like that you boldly chose to show her peeing in the water instead of not. I like the pictures, good scratchy little lines. Reminds me of Storyville. Reminds me of Gollum.
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Dude, that's a good page. I like the drawings, they're moody. I like the penciled words behind the ink words, and I like that you boldly chose to show her peeing in the water instead of not. I like the pictures, good scratchy little lines. Reminds me of Storyville. Reminds me of Gollum.
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I like this more every time I look at it. It is sculpted more than drawn. Carved out of space and time.
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I am the last person who should comment this, but I think it would be better for your work if your lettering was more pro- clear and even in size.
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And where the words are in balloons, placement.
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Right-o. Maybe I can fix it in the computer.
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